Tecoyah has crafted yet another marvelous literary masterpiece with his latest apology. This leaves me in a quandary though!?
Which one is better?!
Its subjective, of course, but I thought I'd pose the question to all the beautiful and unique...uh individuals...here and also provide the rationale for my very own pick.
1)
2)
In both, tecoyah makes an apology to the world. But from there the differences abound.
In number 1, he goes dark. It has a very somber and doomsday feel and one gets a punch in the gut about our nation having fallen. We were good but now we are not. We are not nice anymore gosh-darnit and we will soon become weak because of it. I have to be honest, this one left me with goose-pimples. I don't mind a dark work now and again and this one goes there, you know? Its not just dark, its laying in a gutter with the smell of urine around you and drinking jim beam from a mini-bottle - dark.
when tecoyah does number 2,:giggle: he takes some literary freedom and uses the creative metaphor of a child, AKA the young nation of the US. He begs forgiveness based on the youngness of the country. Were trying and please be patient with us. You can just picture the little darling with a pacifier in his mouth. Bless his heart!
I like this one a lot. Its more hopeful (because we are going to get rid of you-know-who) and provides a reason for our "boo boo,"(youngness...though some would say excuse, I dare say). Bottom line, I pick number two, because aspects of this one are frankly, just too adorable.
Which one is better?!
Its subjective, of course, but I thought I'd pose the question to all the beautiful and unique...uh individuals...here and also provide the rationale for my very own pick.
1)
2)
In both, tecoyah makes an apology to the world. But from there the differences abound.
In number 1, he goes dark. It has a very somber and doomsday feel and one gets a punch in the gut about our nation having fallen. We were good but now we are not. We are not nice anymore gosh-darnit and we will soon become weak because of it. I have to be honest, this one left me with goose-pimples. I don't mind a dark work now and again and this one goes there, you know? Its not just dark, its laying in a gutter with the smell of urine around you and drinking jim beam from a mini-bottle - dark.
when tecoyah does number 2,:giggle: he takes some literary freedom and uses the creative metaphor of a child, AKA the young nation of the US. He begs forgiveness based on the youngness of the country. Were trying and please be patient with us. You can just picture the little darling with a pacifier in his mouth. Bless his heart!
I like this one a lot. Its more hopeful (because we are going to get rid of you-know-who) and provides a reason for our "boo boo,"(youngness...though some would say excuse, I dare say). Bottom line, I pick number two, because aspects of this one are frankly, just too adorable.
